Good and fun
When you get better technically i look forward to new material from you.
I laughed out loud because of the lyrics.
( but because the way its mixed its a bit hard to keep listening
Good and fun
When you get better technically i look forward to new material from you.
I laughed out loud because of the lyrics.
( but because the way its mixed its a bit hard to keep listening
Sorry it was a little rough to listen to. Be sure to check out any of my other songs (especially from this year) to see something I've actually tried hard on!
Regards,
merlin
i am not being rude
But this is not a remix it is mide with instruments replaced sorry dude.....
yes, i did use tabs to get the chord progression right, but everything else was done on my own. Did you eve hear the original song?
It is....
Good as it is but it really needs rap. What you have is more than enough to make a song from.
The organ in the beginnig i would for the chorus the organ tone scale section i would use for the refrein then only one thing you need is a bridge where you build from one to the other!!!
Good job Throw in some rap Bro!!!!
thanks briio
How power full drums can be when they are left out
Great song good melody i amazed by how powerfull it is with just kick and snap
!!!!!!!! try to get some good vst the piano sound could be nicer or is it a electronic acoustic guitar simulation? It is really good!
yeah it's a midi guitar played through the directwave player, thanks though, i like the simplicity of it too
Dude is so fresh!
The only thing i think is a bit overdone is the autotune effect on the chorus
Other than that you must get a record deal real soon!!!
haha glad you likeed it lolol
Needs short but emotional rap
not moreto say greatsong!
Yes, if a rapper added lyrics to it, this would be great!^^
Good!
I am givin a seven because you need to work on the technical side of recording and mastering and in the beginning the timing was a little bit off.
watch some tutorials on mastering because you have a different flow which is good and talent!
thanks for the listen, I'm not sure if youre talking about the gritty kinda sound, but that was an intentional effect. I'm usually trying out different stuff with different levels of success. In general though I think you're right, I would love to genuinely learn how to master and all that good stuff.
Amazing
Very good i like the sadness in it! You have talent my friend!
thank you!
If.....
If you find a way to make this into a complete song together with some vocals.
This is charts material.
Vocals ( think Phats and Small )
Arrangement ( Think Daft Punk and Phats and Small and Cassius)
This has the makings of a megahit.
I didn't download it because its 57 seconds but i will download the full track.
For that reason i gave it a 4 and 9. i don't want to pressure you but if you meet all of the suggestions i made you... you will make a 5 and 10 from everyone!
This is SOOOOOO Dance and sound so good!
thanks
Good job
Nice remix i don't know the original. A bit of in the vocals
Experiment some more it has potential!
Good job next time remix a better song :P
Cheeky :P
This was the only vocals that really caught my attention, so I just tried something
Music is passion creation is a gift!
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