Man you are an awesome crooner!
Thanks man :)
Keep working on it!
The idea is great!
The prógression is quiet rigid so it doesnt really flow.
try to build more of a story with the song
Introduction prologue mid part intermission end part final climax and maybe outro
If you think and feel more in this way to song will flow more.
Good parts but now the flow :D
Sorry Its a draw! The attacks and comebacks are equally inventive and bot very funny!
For me its Eye cue
When a battle turns into a real good song I can't decide who wins because they both take their parts to the best what can be made of it!
Keep doing the vocal stuff!!!!
Seems that Daft Punk caught up on your style and are releasing your style now as their evolutionary style.... When you were the first to move into this style
Nice take on punk taking it into the new age!
I am gonna be completely honest with you...
The music is okay not good not bad.
However i have heard your talent.
I have had the chills down my spine and my hairs stand up at the back of my neck.
When i heard alice is dead.
That song i still play and i have it on my iphone.
Alice is dead and other songs you have done are more in the realm of grown up professional music.
Dragon Ball doesnt do it for me and neither does my little pony.
You have the talent to make it in the music business but not with these songs.
I am not sure if the goal is to make in the music business? But if i were you i would give it a shot but with the other other style.
Do dragon ball and my little pony for fun but please i beg you keep to the real good stuff!
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