IIPhase's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Twisted Hello]

very good!!

I like it faved it!

Twistedtechnology responds:

thanks!

[Haze - Art Syndicate]

Its a good start!!!

your bass sound over cluttered the rest of the song beat is very good but you synths are smashed by the bass wich is way to loud.
You will be better with practice the song is good !!!

ArtSyndicate responds:

I made it on poor laptop speakers, you have to overlook the bad mastering and mixing ;D

Thanks!

[hello again]

Finish it

a 3 cuz it is a tease.
A five if it will continue as good as it is into a longer song!!!
Its really Goooooood!!!!! but i am teasing you now by giving a 3
You are just mean putting something this good on here for so short!!!!!!
I want this to be a full song and it goes straight into my I pod

Twistedtechnology responds:

I will definitely be trying to make this into an entire song. i just need to work with a few kinks. the computer im using will overload kinda easily in FL studio, so making this into a whole song is gonna take a lot of rendering..and a good bit of time. so, if you can hang in there, i'll get it knocked out ASAP!! i was just throwing this out there 1.) yea...to tease...but also
2.) to see if people still like what i make XD

either way, thanks for the review! I'll get to working on this soon!

[[DJ_ITD] - 6ixth Sense]

Incredibly Powerfull in emotions!!!

I Love it!!!

djInTheDark responds:

I aim to please!

DJ InTheDark

[Hole in a Wall]

Sorry to inform you

But you should change the THE THE name it already excists :(
It was a band in the 80ties.
To my knowledge they never stopped....

MarkArandjus responds:

We know we know, in fact there's an entire section on our MySpace explaining it :P
We're even friends with the original The The, got them tagged and everything :)

We just like the name too much.
Thanks for the seven!

[[Made]]

It actually is trance but you just

Left out the dance beat and now it sort of ambient :P

Kinosei responds:

the techno/dance sounds is what I like to use... theres any genre name for this music?

[~|| Dying away]

Compostion is there!!

Work on your sounds a bit
The drumms are pretty standard.
The sounds are standard pretty much too.
They take away the uniqueness that this composition really has in store for us.
It actually draws it back into a mediocre piece and it is not it is a good composition.
Good JOB

T-Free responds:

Well, you're right. I could make it more unique with special drums and some effects. I'll work on it again with considering your criticism. Thank you!^^

[Ibiza(night life part 1)]

It is promissing!

I Think the beginning is is wonderfull.
The baseline relly works with the drums but at some point there are pushed a bit backwards Be the high noted theme Probably due to overall compression and that is a shame. The bass drives the beat in this on making them less important in the latter stages is a shame.
Rather give it a more prominent role. Seperate Compression on the bassline will do it good.
Further more work on the drum compression the hihats and snares or on top of it all It need that pumping and suction sound that DANCE and House has.
I would use the Hight note theme in brakes and bridges if it stays like it.
Or play with a counter theme with them so tit envolves in more intresting melodic kind of thing.
But not to much melody please just a counter effect.
If you would want a melody in here places to but it is in brakes.
And keep the main parts rythmic and slightly monotone. That is the parts where people want to dance and get into the rythm.

Good start finish please!
peep me when done!
BTW great effects in the beginning good foor breaks and bridges as well.
The second effect lower in tone ends a little to late.

djEkco responds:

thanks man.
i will definetly work on it

[Some Electro WIP]

Leave out:

the Arp it is very good but it needs and extra contra bass to the one that is the backbone....!!!!!!

RikiOh responds:

Well SOMEBODY likes the 'arp.' I guess I arranged the notes/delay on that to give it an arp effect. I see what you mean though, I just changed the bassline that plays behind the arp and it sounds a bit better. Although I'm still not entirely sold on whether or not I like the arp. Thanks for the advice.