Its good
but asking for a rap in this one would mean that it would be a mighty sweet rap.
I am not sure that it will suit it that well.
It is a nice and uplifting instrumental right now!!
Judged as an 8.5 so i am rounding it to a 9!
Its good
but asking for a rap in this one would mean that it would be a mighty sweet rap.
I am not sure that it will suit it that well.
It is a nice and uplifting instrumental right now!!
Judged as an 8.5 so i am rounding it to a 9!
It is....
Good as it is but it really needs rap. What you have is more than enough to make a song from.
The organ in the beginnig i would for the chorus the organ tone scale section i would use for the refrein then only one thing you need is a bridge where you build from one to the other!!!
Good job Throw in some rap Bro!!!!
thanks briio
Great
Really good needs some mastering but really good! Damn
How power full drums can be when they are left out
Great song good melody i amazed by how powerfull it is with just kick and snap
!!!!!!!! try to get some good vst the piano sound could be nicer or is it a electronic acoustic guitar simulation? It is really good!
yeah it's a midi guitar played through the directwave player, thanks though, i like the simplicity of it too
NICE
Its mixed to hard it overrides!
But it is real good!!!
Damn good song
I think the song is strong and full emotion.
Things i feel could be better:
1The piano loop does not loop correct.
2 some times the timing of music and the vocals is off.
it seems that its recorded in one run you can hear that.
Proffesional artists don't that they sing the song 10 20 times depending on who it is. They then mix it cut it edit it etc.
(If you are interested i would like to have a go add mastering and polishing this.)
3 the voice is dry but its not really a bad thing. but when the backings come in this is where you the reason for a dry voice should be apparant.
when the backing refrein sets they sould have reverb and should have a broad stereo spectrum. They should provide the ambience.
4 the drums are at points very over crowded with little snares that repeat and repeat and they sound off although when i listen carefully they are not,
My guess is that less is more on these parts.
Listen if you are interested i can take a look at this.
Great stuff True artists thats what you are creating is and art mastering and skill is skill that comes with time and practice you can and will learn that.
Keep on going you will get there!
Dude is so fresh!
The only thing i think is a bit overdone is the autotune effect on the chorus
Other than that you must get a record deal real soon!!!
haha glad you likeed it lolol
Needs short but emotional rap
not moreto say greatsong!
Yes, if a rapper added lyrics to it, this would be great!^^
Good!
I am givin a seven because you need to work on the technical side of recording and mastering and in the beginning the timing was a little bit off.
watch some tutorials on mastering because you have a different flow which is good and talent!
thanks for the listen, I'm not sure if youre talking about the gritty kinda sound, but that was an intentional effect. I'm usually trying out different stuff with different levels of success. In general though I think you're right, I would love to genuinely learn how to master and all that good stuff.
Music is passion creation is a gift!
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