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[Ibiza(night life part 1)]

It is promissing!

I Think the beginning is is wonderfull.
The baseline relly works with the drums but at some point there are pushed a bit backwards Be the high noted theme Probably due to overall compression and that is a shame. The bass drives the beat in this on making them less important in the latter stages is a shame.
Rather give it a more prominent role. Seperate Compression on the bassline will do it good.
Further more work on the drum compression the hihats and snares or on top of it all It need that pumping and suction sound that DANCE and House has.
I would use the Hight note theme in brakes and bridges if it stays like it.
Or play with a counter theme with them so tit envolves in more intresting melodic kind of thing.
But not to much melody please just a counter effect.
If you would want a melody in here places to but it is in brakes.
And keep the main parts rythmic and slightly monotone. That is the parts where people want to dance and get into the rythm.

Good start finish please!
peep me when done!
BTW great effects in the beginning good foor breaks and bridges as well.
The second effect lower in tone ends a little to late.

djEkco responds:

thanks man.
i will definetly work on it

[Some Electro WIP]

Leave out:

the Arp it is very good but it needs and extra contra bass to the one that is the backbone....!!!!!!

RikiOh responds:

Well SOMEBODY likes the 'arp.' I guess I arranged the notes/delay on that to give it an arp effect. I see what you mean though, I just changed the bassline that plays behind the arp and it sounds a bit better. Although I'm still not entirely sold on whether or not I like the arp. Thanks for the advice.

[Scooma]

I digg this

It's could be electronic or progressive house both categories do not exist here.
I Really digg this however you should make it about 3.50 to 4.5 minutes so that its a real song its just a little to short.
It sounds a bit like The Joker from Dark Knight :)

[Glimmer of the City]

Its more ambient than trance

It could also go as a pop song

[DjKevinax-CalmSpirit]

Not trance

This is Ambient and nice ambient!! Good!

[More And More]

Sorry the girl needs to sing other lyrics

I like the music and that is the best part.
The text i don't like at all
More and more sounds like less and less in my ears i give you a good rating because i can hear your talent none the less.

[Better off Alone (Cover)]

Doesn't really add anything to the original

It sounds proffesional but in my opinion if you want to make a cover add something to the original that makes covering it really worth the effort.
Now it doesn't really do anything for me. You have the talent to take this to another level but now it is very close to the original.

Use your talents on a cover please because from your other songs i hear that you have that godgiven talent!!!

Phoxxy232 responds:

My plan with this was to remake the song as best i could not remix it, and i didnt want to call it "Better off alone (Remake)" Because people wouldn't be as interested in hearing it

[Latham&Stone - Your Fellow Man]

Good song

Lyrics need work especially noitcable when its only voice.
Mastering voices is complete other issue.
The voice is actually not bad at all an the text is oke.
But its thin it and its a bit off on timing on some occasions.
Good work nonetheless!!!! 8.5 actually

By the way there are some great tutorials on voices tweakings.
A double voicerecording is a trick often used.
Further more voice need much more eq in the range from mid to high
Never take out the bass completely though.

Again Good job

[Our World {durn}]

It reminds me of

a melody of a song by Fleetwood mac Big Love. It has the same feel to it except this is more dance and different. Very nice Listen to the FLeetwood Mac song its on Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sl6GeP RpVlA
i can hear some groove similarities.

GOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!

durn responds:

loved that fleetwood song when I was a wee lad and it was on the radio. damn, that means that song was stuck in some form in my head for 22 years and I'm just getting it out. :P damn catchy fleetwood mac.

:D nice comparison, man. I appreciate that. I do love the funk and rock influences.