Incredibly Powerfull in emotions!!!
I Love it!!!
Incredibly Powerfull in emotions!!!
I Love it!!!
TOP!!
COMPLETE AND PROFESSIONAL YOU ARE READY FOR THE CHARTS!!!!!!!!
Not Trance
Okay effort
Sorry to inform you
But you should change the THE THE name it already excists :(
It was a band in the 80ties.
To my knowledge they never stopped....
We know we know, in fact there's an entire section on our MySpace explaining it :P
We're even friends with the original The The, got them tagged and everything :)
We just like the name too much.
Thanks for the seven!
It actually is trance but you just
Left out the dance beat and now it sort of ambient :P
the techno/dance sounds is what I like to use... theres any genre name for this music?
This is Way Better!!!!
Here the bass is getting its part and start to be dominant force in the song.
Be carefull withdoes hihats the have an evil clicking sound which works anoying.
Good theme when the bass kicks in take over with another sound as the round going synth that is going on all the time.
Don't transpose down but up Down in dance often feel as a bummer except when you go a step up right after that!
Good potential!
( 9/10 Room for improvement )
Good Job
you are improving and i like it!
The song is pretty good!
It deserves better than getting zerobombed but that is what happens whit a lot of submissions. I gave you a 4/5 and 8/10
Work a little on the crispyness of the overall composition drums and stuff
Because the theme now lies on top of everything and the piano sinks in.
Compostion is there!!
Work on your sounds a bit
The drumms are pretty standard.
The sounds are standard pretty much too.
They take away the uniqueness that this composition really has in store for us.
It actually draws it back into a mediocre piece and it is not it is a good composition.
Good JOB
Well, you're right. I could make it more unique with special drums and some effects. I'll work on it again with considering your criticism. Thank you!^^
It is promissing!
I Think the beginning is is wonderfull.
The baseline relly works with the drums but at some point there are pushed a bit backwards Be the high noted theme Probably due to overall compression and that is a shame. The bass drives the beat in this on making them less important in the latter stages is a shame.
Rather give it a more prominent role. Seperate Compression on the bassline will do it good.
Further more work on the drum compression the hihats and snares or on top of it all It need that pumping and suction sound that DANCE and House has.
I would use the Hight note theme in brakes and bridges if it stays like it.
Or play with a counter theme with them so tit envolves in more intresting melodic kind of thing.
But not to much melody please just a counter effect.
If you would want a melody in here places to but it is in brakes.
And keep the main parts rythmic and slightly monotone. That is the parts where people want to dance and get into the rythm.
Good start finish please!
peep me when done!
BTW great effects in the beginning good foor breaks and bridges as well.
The second effect lower in tone ends a little to late.
thanks man.
i will definetly work on it
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