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it is very good!

This professional and certainly finished.
What is missing is a female singing catchy lyrics.
But the production is
10/10
5/5
Samples used are general samples but you manipulated them in a good way so theysound fresh and new!
Really catchy happy melody.

JordanRothery responds:

thank you very, very much :)

Everything is well constructed

But i really advise you to wander from the paths that you have been taking till now.
You start off with a slow intro and go over into dance.
It's oke but not surprising and original now.
The Melody is really good. The slower part could be some sort of hip hop song
If you divide it in parts intro couplet refrein bridge couplet break refrein refrein couplet ending or what ever you like.
The dance part is good in itself same as the songs before not my taste but solid and good.
The balance of the instruments is at least set to left and right. But that doesn't mean that you are finished. You really need to search for the correcte balance.
Meaning that it doen't need to be all to the right or all the left and it doesn't need to be on full left or right. A good tip is to picture your music as a band playing on stage and see what would go where. It is simple but it works.

And really loose the sample: Are you ready. If you want to be surprising with samples take stuff from documentaries or movies. Or even the news.
Sounds strange? Just try and be surprising a bit more.

Just start the next song without doing anything the same way you have done before. Try and reinvent your way of working just for once.
Make a complete song in one style. Hip hop or R&B or dance.

Just do it and see how it enriches you in all kinds of ways when you do that!
You have talent and you are really good at what you are doing now you need to explore your talents!!

9/10 5/5

To much use of samples

it sounds good and what you did with them is good.
But it shows you talent to remixe with samples which is a talent too.
However i would like to hear a jazz piece from you that you compose.

As a mix with samples i rate this: 8/10 4/5
If you would have composed this from scratch it would have had more value to me.

Good job none the less

xerochi responds:

To me samples are like Legos of music and I like to see what I can build with them:) One is in works so keep your eyes peeled!

Amazing

I made it fav song and faved you!
Very good song this!

A little to much up and down in the vocals just a bit to much.
the ducking i mean

10/10 5/5

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Proffessional

Good work i like this!
Nice production!
9/10 5/5

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Great

needs a bit of mastering to get it all out.

good song nonetheless!!!
10/10 5/5

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you could call this drumm and bass

But as it is right now it is already very suitable as videogame music
It doesn't really have the D&B sounds to be D&B
as videogame music i will rate it:
9/10 5/5

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Yep this is definately

Sound design!
Rating it as such!

9/10 5/5

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Just great

8/10 5/5
the drums just a little louder and the bells a little less volume

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I understand what you wanted to achieve

It is not a song but its more of a sound texture for in a movie.
Newgrounds should make a genre just for this Callled:
Sound design.

Rating it for what it is: 9/10 5/5

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Music is passion creation is a gift!

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