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[~|| Dying away]

Compostion is there!!

Work on your sounds a bit
The drumms are pretty standard.
The sounds are standard pretty much too.
They take away the uniqueness that this composition really has in store for us.
It actually draws it back into a mediocre piece and it is not it is a good composition.
Good JOB

T-Free responds:

Well, you're right. I could make it more unique with special drums and some effects. I'll work on it again with considering your criticism. Thank you!^^

[Ibiza(night life part 1)]

It is promissing!

I Think the beginning is is wonderfull.
The baseline relly works with the drums but at some point there are pushed a bit backwards Be the high noted theme Probably due to overall compression and that is a shame. The bass drives the beat in this on making them less important in the latter stages is a shame.
Rather give it a more prominent role. Seperate Compression on the bassline will do it good.
Further more work on the drum compression the hihats and snares or on top of it all It need that pumping and suction sound that DANCE and House has.
I would use the Hight note theme in brakes and bridges if it stays like it.
Or play with a counter theme with them so tit envolves in more intresting melodic kind of thing.
But not to much melody please just a counter effect.
If you would want a melody in here places to but it is in brakes.
And keep the main parts rythmic and slightly monotone. That is the parts where people want to dance and get into the rythm.

Good start finish please!
peep me when done!
BTW great effects in the beginning good foor breaks and bridges as well.
The second effect lower in tone ends a little to late.

djEkco responds:

thanks man.
i will definetly work on it

[JK:.Gravity]

I just listen to this and wrote instant rap.

I tried to stay up
to stay up up on my feet
Swallowing a zip of my cup
the smell of succes is juz sweet.

I have known hard times
i have known bad rhymes
Been in fights and bust my teeth
I try to stay up up on my feet.

Nothing is gonna bring me down
I must do what a winner must do
Pick up the gold and wear the crown
Wear it with proud and show it to you!

Who is the looser now
Look at me and see
That i found my way to succes
I am the king and you must humbly bow.

Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner once and i am a winner Now
Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner once and I am a winner now
Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner once and i am a winner now
Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner ONCE i am winner now
You used drag me down

I took the way up step by step
You got stuck in your own pathetic ways
I used the gift that god gave me: Rap
You are still acting same like the old days.

My rack is fixed with diamonds and gold
Nothing reminds me of what used nag me
My rap is hard its real and its bold
Succes reach the positive mind let it be told

Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner once and i am a winner Now
Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner once and I am a winner now
Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner once and i am a winner now
Nothing's gonna bring me down
I was a winner ONCE i am winner now
The only thing you did was trying to drag me down

IIPhase I hope you continue because you inspire me!!!!

[Some Electro WIP]

Leave out:

the Arp it is very good but it needs and extra contra bass to the one that is the backbone....!!!!!!

RikiOh responds:

Well SOMEBODY likes the 'arp.' I guess I arranged the notes/delay on that to give it an arp effect. I see what you mean though, I just changed the bassline that plays behind the arp and it sounds a bit better. Although I'm still not entirely sold on whether or not I like the arp. Thanks for the advice.

[Scooma]

I digg this

It's could be electronic or progressive house both categories do not exist here.
I Really digg this however you should make it about 3.50 to 4.5 minutes so that its a real song its just a little to short.
It sounds a bit like The Joker from Dark Knight :)

[Glimmer of the City]

Its more ambient than trance

It could also go as a pop song

[DjKevinax-CalmSpirit]

Not trance

This is Ambient and nice ambient!! Good!

[More And More]

Sorry the girl needs to sing other lyrics

I like the music and that is the best part.
The text i don't like at all
More and more sounds like less and less in my ears i give you a good rating because i can hear your talent none the less.

[Better off Alone (Cover)]

Doesn't really add anything to the original

It sounds proffesional but in my opinion if you want to make a cover add something to the original that makes covering it really worth the effort.
Now it doesn't really do anything for me. You have the talent to take this to another level but now it is very close to the original.

Use your talents on a cover please because from your other songs i hear that you have that godgiven talent!!!

Phoxxy232 responds:

My plan with this was to remake the song as best i could not remix it, and i didnt want to call it "Better off alone (Remake)" Because people wouldn't be as interested in hearing it

[Latham&Stone - Your Fellow Man]

Good song

Lyrics need work especially noitcable when its only voice.
Mastering voices is complete other issue.
The voice is actually not bad at all an the text is oke.
But its thin it and its a bit off on timing on some occasions.
Good work nonetheless!!!! 8.5 actually

By the way there are some great tutorials on voices tweakings.
A double voicerecording is a trick often used.
Further more voice need much more eq in the range from mid to high
Never take out the bass completely though.

Again Good job