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[We Forget]

STANDARD SETTING

REALLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[S...P...O...R...K!!]

Its too short

It is good and it would be smashing if you would startthe real slammer track where it ends now... Just add a second bass synth that is growling on top of the other and build a complete song with dance beat with it!

[Freedom {durn}]

Very good

Your mastering now sounds among the proffesionals!
Its way up there!!!

Thanks for your tips i am creating in complete new way now!!!

durn responds:

Thanks dude. :) Your new stuff is sounding really good. Very melodic and harmonious. :)

[A Twisted Hello]

very good!!

I like it faved it!

Twistedtechnology responds:

thanks!

[Ending the Years]

i like the melody

The one synth sound stands on top of it all and its to dominant!
Other than that good melody!
I felt credit screen to.

[Haze - Art Syndicate]

Its a good start!!!

your bass sound over cluttered the rest of the song beat is very good but you synths are smashed by the bass wich is way to loud.
You will be better with practice the song is good !!!

ArtSyndicate responds:

I made it on poor laptop speakers, you have to overlook the bad mastering and mixing ;D

Thanks!

[baaaaaaaaaaaaadsong]

Drums are not that hard to do

Build them in the sequence by pushing buttons on and off eventually it build a rhythm. It will help stay on the beat. You have a musical ear more than others around here. Tempo is bit off here and there you can compose with a metronome in fruity. its next to the clock.
You can allways quantize the recorded stuff in the piano roll editor tools.
KEEP IT UP!!!

[hello again]

Finish it

a 3 cuz it is a tease.
A five if it will continue as good as it is into a longer song!!!
Its really Goooooood!!!!! but i am teasing you now by giving a 3
You are just mean putting something this good on here for so short!!!!!!
I want this to be a full song and it goes straight into my I pod

Twistedtechnology responds:

I will definitely be trying to make this into an entire song. i just need to work with a few kinks. the computer im using will overload kinda easily in FL studio, so making this into a whole song is gonna take a lot of rendering..and a good bit of time. so, if you can hang in there, i'll get it knocked out ASAP!! i was just throwing this out there 1.) yea...to tease...but also
2.) to see if people still like what i make XD

either way, thanks for the review! I'll get to working on this soon!

[Emo song for Valérie]

Dude Any nazi thing should be left out!!

The composition is pretty good but change that part leave it OUT of the text.
I think is EMO is good but Suicide and nazi reference is walking the wrong path in life!

Gurzociurlo responds:

I'm not nazi, I am just a nice, altruistic zealous individual, therefore, a n.a.z.i. .

[Voices of the wind]

The recording is a bit so so

I can absolutely feel it it's sinister and spiritual i like it a lot!!!!