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[Kami | Cricket's song]

Great title

And great song although the diversion could have come a bit sooner for my taste the dryness of the clap was just great! All in all it is a great song as are many of your songs they have a language of it's own and if i didn't know any better you are saying to me now that we should work on album together and release it!
:D Yes it is a proposal!

Kamikazi1 responds:

man i would love to work on an album together :D

[Kami | Show me]

What the f man

Just great! It would be great to have actual lyrics in this mix as well.
Together with all you have right here! Thge ending is what caught me of guard.
It was great but somehow a bit strange in some sort unfinished loopstyle where i am wishing for the second four measures. The way that is right now is suprising and very original and i think that is even better!
5/5 10/10

Kamikazi1 responds:

thanks man, i had a blast mixing this one!

[A Hanging (Preview)]

:) just great

He is not referring to war of the worlds the movie ;)
But the Album War of the worlds by Jeff Wayne and at some parts he is right ;)
It has the same awesome style at some parts! Just amazing!
10/10 5/5

broosree responds:

Aaaahhh - that makes a lot more sense. I appreciate it! Thanks. :-)

[SHS - Around the World]

It is Dance

Dance is only a narrow genre if you know the one part.
There is 80ties dance 90ties dance new millenium dance.
This is most certain dance but just not the fast happy dance from the past 10 years
10/10 5/5

broosree responds:

Thanks! I'm thinking I'd like to redo the B section of this one, so I'll let you know when I post a new one.

[SHS - In the Park]

:) Man You could have been the fifth

Beatle! 9/10 5/5

broosree responds:

Haha - I'm not sure where I'd cite an influence for this one...maybe a spiritual meets a 'Devil Went Down to Georgia.' The immediate impetus to make the song was Gaiman, as I said. Thanks!

[SHS - Seams of Memories Pview]

I think it is very good

However your voice sounds better without the auto tune effect.
Then again it is very suited for this song. Although some people will just hate the autotune. Some parts remind me of: My love wears forbidden colours By David Bowie and Riyuchi Sakamoto. Other parts have a feel of OMD over it.
All in all great composition wonderfull song!
5/5 10/10

broosree responds:

Thanks - I actually auto-tuned this one because I was having trouble getting it exactly right, I'm a bit ashamed to admit. But I like the effect either way. I know I can sing in tune, so this was just a foray into a different sound. ;-)

[Sohanstag - 540]

I like this so much

Just great!!!!!! 10/10 5/5
Your voice is mix between the voices of the Beatles Simon Le Bon of Duran Duran

broosree responds:

Thanks! This is another older one - I made this in 2006 or so I guess. No software instruments - just lots of manipulating one or two sound files (organ/drum).

[SHS - Lower than Angels]

You have it under jazz

And i hear that it has a lot of jazz in it but what you should do is listen to the Beatles.
I have just bought the Beatles remastered box. Before that i had never really had an interest in the Beatles.... but what i have learned is that they experimented like crazy. You wouldn't believe how much this sounds like the Beatles and hey you can get a worse comparison lol!
Listen to Abby road and the white album especially!
5/5 9/10 -1 because i think the freestyle outro deserves to be more on the foreground especially the higher voice that voice needs to be lifted earlier too.

Great Song Well done!

broosree responds:

What a great compliment! I am truly honored. When I wrote this I was actually thinking of some of Paul McCartney's 'parlor music,' which is related to jazz and popular music of the late 1800s/early 1900s. I love both Abbey Road and the White Album, though Abbey Road is by far my favorite.

Again, I can't say thank you enough for the very kind comparison. I'm enjoying your music!

[Night Train]

As a start for a song it is really good!

But it sounds like a bridge that or a refrain that is going on and on.
What i would do is plan for segments.
What happens often is that yo make something like this something that sound really good. But because it is a stumble upon you don't know what to do with it....
Do you just keep it ... hence the upload of 58 seconds.
Think in structures of a song think intro couplet refrain bridge outro
Now you can have refrains bridge and couplet anywhere and in any order between the intro and the outro or leave the intro out and start with a couplet or refrain from the get go.
This is good what you have done you get full score form me in the hope that you succeed in making it into a full song.
By the way you have put it under pop and that is fine but it has a lot of funk elements. The baseline and the rhythm guitar are really funky!
10/10 5/5
Good job!

[Kami | Deeper things]

Just damn

Fantastic I love it!!!
You are the man!!!!!
10/10 5/5

Kamikazi1 responds:

Nah YOU da man!!!