IIPhase's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Strang]

Just not that good

I hope you will continue to grow it needs to grow your talent that is...
:D Continue with music because it is a positive thing!!!
6/10 keep at it!

[Precious.]

Sorry man but

i don't think it is that good.
For me it lacks a good melody nice structure and an idea behind it.
It is an absolute riddle how you ended up in the top 5.......

6/0 for your effort in music. Keep growing so that you will get better.
You have the basic understanding but it needs to grow.
1/5

[Kami | Rock steady]

Seriously dude!!!

This is bebop jazz! It's not old school hip hop.
And you are really great at it!!!!
:D

10/10 5/5

Kamikazi1 responds:

Ha ha thanks dude!

[I See You(757irish Remix)]

Really good

Try to make it soudn a bit more full it lacks a bit of mid and low mid.
But good song i like it very much!

10/10 5/5

[Dear You]

Really good and the

riff at 3:04 is great
Be careful with the alignment of the timing wich is hard in multitrack recording...
10/10 5/5

Good Job

Please return the favor on my new song: For me

rockgodm responds:

Thanks!
Yeah, that's deff something I need to work on. This was done a while ago, and I've gotten a lot better at it, but still not where I want to be.
I spent about 20 minutes working out the melody at 3:04, because the original intention was to have about 4 guitar harmonies, but it got too cluttered and sounded bad, so I left it where it was with just this.

[Deepwater]

Really good

To solve your problem with the saw use a limiter in the master channel and in the channel of the saw.

Good song 10/10 5/5

please return the favor on my new song: For me.

ChineseCommando responds:

Okay, I will keep that in mind. thanks for the review and the advice!

[Kami | Smokin' Reefers]

Hey man

i would put this under jazz.... i can see why you are tempted to say it is old school Hip hop but to me it is jazz It is soulful and very jazzy. It doesn't have any rap with would take it to the hip hop genre. It sounds more like the jazz style called bebop.
Listen to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e_9cUz qExTM take out the spaces.
I could say that is hip hop to but it is jazz bebop.
So my soul friend! Time show your colors :D Join the jazz gang! And let's start a group of people like they did in the old days. A group of people that inspire each other! Good Job!

Kamikazi1 responds:

LETS DO IT
lol thanks man my music is highly influenced by jazz music!

[The Dark Joker]

90% complete :D

Real good drums sound that are compressed in a awesome way.
The percussion added is a real good touch.
The baseline sounds awesome. However personally i like the first part of that baseline better for the song and i would used that in general and the longer baseline in the breaks. But that is just a personal opinion. No points of.
That being said it misses something... A gimmick and extra a thing that will take this up to a level that can compete with Benassi or Le Grand.
This can be short part sample vocal or a melody.
Or just downright vocals.
So in my opinion it as a professional production that can compete with the best out there. It just misses that extra 10 % of completion.

In terms of quality ( that is what i am reviewing ) It is perfect! Just write good lyrics and have a vocalist sing on this track and you are on your way to become a star man!

10/10 5/5

Nechura responds:

Thanks for reviewing man, I'm glad you like it. So about what you said, I'll probably open it up tomorrow arvo and try add some stuff to it. As I said up there, it could have been better so I'll try aye. Oh yeah and about vocals, I might record a few weird whispers and stuff to use for fx but I'm not sure if I could find an accapella that would work with this. Anyways, thanks for checking it out :)

[Orchestral Theme 3]

Woaw

I could say: Lord of the Rings, Troy, Alexander, Spartacus, 300. I mean Just any movie with large epic battles. I could hear were your inspiration came from and it would fit that game very good it is Awesome EPIC and sounds downright like a battle preparation of the Demonic Army.

Great Great EPIC!

10/10 5/5

Gravey responds:

Thank you very much.

-Gravey-

[Feeling Within]

One advice

It is heard in one entry and that entry really brings down your music....
You should try and get it out of that submission....

Good song man!
9/10