Some
Stupid underaged kids came by and did not have the descency or the patience to listen it completely.
It is a gem. Completely and utterly a gem.
If it was gold it would have been 50 Karat gold.
This should be on a record it is actually this good.
If you have this kind of talent don't waste it here anymore.
Sublime!!! 10/10 5/5
Listen to my submission if you have the time!
I rather have you listen to it than a noob :)
not jazz
good but not jazz
It's a shame
That they still don't have a soul section it should be in there.
It is good make it complete!! :)
Soul :P
well i'm glad you liked it! Thank you for taking the time to review!
The first notes
Reminded me of a song. Against all odds by Phil collins not completely just the feel.
Very soon moves to something completely different.
For me the happy go lucky parts are well composed but not really for my taste.
The parts blend well together and the subtle use of a filter is just sublime.
I like the breaks. They take me to the emotions and suspense that i love and really like.
The thing is i just feel the in and out of the darkness is a bit abrupt.
The contrast of light and dark is a bit to big for me.
The whole song is very good on the part of mastering.
I like it when there is a lot going on and you actually here it :-)
The high synth supporting the is a gem it starts at about 0:58 seconds
All in all to happy for me but well done in all aspects!!!
Aye, I hear where you're comin' from. It's a bit heavy of a transition. Guess you could call this my bipolar track. lol. :D
And glad you liked that high synth. I spent some time trying to get it nice and airy/spacious, keeping it's volume low but still making it shine through.
Thanks for the great, review, IIPhase. :)
melodies are a bit
to simple for me not very surprising in the beginning that puts me off still overall pretty decent.
Some synths at around 5 minutes are so loud that the drown the beat.
and a good techno trance or dance is about the beat or the absence of beat if you are in a break and build to the beat.
Do not considerthis to be your theme because you will improve and the theme you have now will not be your theme in let's say a year from now!
It's betterto have your audience decide what your signature piece is :)
believ me audiences will perceive you differently than you do yourself :)
Keep on going!
Thank you ^^, I feel very motivated by your response. I will keep it up!
I think its good but
It needs the have a kick ass beat.
You can do a large part with just the instruments but then at one point introduce a kick ass beat.
Then i would have given a perfect 10 and a perfect 5
now it's 8/10 and 4/5 for me.
Still a good song tho
Yea, the lrics don;t match the beat cuz I wrote em for another beat but It didn;t get finished for a whie, so here it is, Nyce beat I belive tho, has sum pretty loud and deep bass, It's not my production so I can't edit it too much, thanx for the review tho
Use
Better microphone...
The flow in the beginning is not that good.
Later it gets much better. When you get into it.
When recording make sure the mic stays in the same range to your mouth all the time.
There is a trick to get into a flow before it really starts and that is:
Rap from the beginning but cut what you don't need later.
In that way you are allready in a flow when you get the part where you have the start.
The sound of the piano
I don't like sound of the piano i like the strange melody but then again i am strange :P
I'll give
a seven it is actually not bad at all.
It needs to be longer to tickle my pickle.
It has potential but that is all i can say you can still ruin it or make it into something beautiful it's still an embryo waiting to be born....
Please finish it!
Music is passion creation is a gift!
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art degree
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(My Lost Dream)