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Very Good

I can see this totally in good shooter!
Nice string part!!
Good melodies

5/5 9/10

Please return the favour with my new song!
;-)

I like the combination

Of the 8 bit and the real drumsounds!
The sounds are well balanced.
You might want to see when you expand this to have a little variation in the high synth notes for an intor its pretty damn good but when it gets longer that synth good do with some extra's|

good Job !

Please return the favour with my new song!
;-)

VERY GOOOOD

This has your own unique style written allover it!
Very new and refreshing ! I lik ethe skidding here !

Pokemeon responds:

Thank you i didn't know if this track would even be popular haha

You should put this

Under classical It is definately classical.
Good job good work.
Nice changes in temp i like that and it make me wanna experiment with that too!

Gravey responds:

This is actually a more contemporary style of playing. Classical is more along the lines of the greats such as Mozart, Chopin, Brahms, etc. This I would say is more along the lines of contemporary piano composition, such as how Jay Rouse or Jim Brickman compose. Granted this is not quite on their level, but I would say it is more along the lines of their contemporary style than classical.

Glad you liked the tune. :-)

-Gravey-

I don't know

If they have a genre Industrial?? i would have put that in there.
I think that this is a pretty good genre pick too good job continue!!!!

InvisibleObserver responds:

I don't worry much about the genre. Arguably this has elements of industrial, experimental, drum and bass, music concrete and little tid bits of other things. It fits more closely to a genre mash up then it does one in particular.

NG's option list most musicians feel limited by, regardless of their genre or talent. Its a good detail to largely ignore.

Very nice beat

I had some problems personally with tremelo on some of the sounds.
But hey thats just me they make me weird in my ear.

Not my style too short

But well crafted can;t really burn it down because i don't like the style. :)

I don't agree with

KaoticAlchemist.
It is good enough to be in the top 5.
However i do have some remarks...
You don't rely on dynamics you rely on turning down the volume knob or up.
The thing is a piano can be played loud and soft and those are the dynamics.
The fact that soft parts with volume takes a away some emotion in the composition.
If you have a keyboard you should try to use the hardness of your strike on the keyboard that is called velocity. Don't don't be afraid to have your program record it on medium volume.
Natural velocity is always better. The other thing is that i hated how it looped because a classical piece like this should end more appropriate.

I am gonna take 1 point off for these minor details :) hope you don't hate me now :)

9/10 5/5

Good

Really good beat what was lacking in my song you have a bit to much.
I like the hanging or skidding of the loops but you are using it to many times.
Use them in breaks or at the end of chorus o the intro of a chorus same goes for refreins. Maybe a sort 1 measure bridge with the skids.
And when you have them in make sure that they or all spot on.
They now disturb the flow a bit.

I like the melodic part a lot very suited for a epic Rap.
Buidl it into a complete song and use your skids wisely even after a keyword in the rap it could really be put to good use.

Anyways good start of this song.
I will be following your songs more often from now on!

Pokemeon responds:

thanks for telling me about the skids part man i know exactly what you mean sometime they overflow the beat with there sound, ill b sure to change it when im done working on the beat!

the synths are

very loud and with much reverb they drown the beat other than that pretty good!!

dicennian responds:

Thanks for the critique mate! - I will make an update and squeeze some of that reverb out later :)

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