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[V3<>Real party (happy trance)]

You need to use another bass sound

Work on the balance of all instruments.
Look at some tutorials on compression and limiting
The song is actually pretty good for what you are trying to aim for.
The technical side needs adressing There are plenty of tutorials on youtube watch them they will help you!!

Good effort 8/10 5/5

vinc3 responds:

thanks for the adviss
thank you very much ;)

[Awake - Paradise Surrounds Us]

good job

Wonderful wonderful
Make it longer and PM me please!!

10/10 5/5

Rawrthaas responds:

thanks :) will do

[100 Club TechnoGasm 2]

Just keep at it

It's really disonant but keep working and you will get better!!!
The basics are there. The beat can be a bit better but thats me!
6/10 3/5 because you will get better and you will get the grips of this!
I started out the same way with no help etc!!!

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[Empty Remorse...]

It is a good start

but it doesn't really have a trance beat.
The intro is okay but beware of playing your melodies on the whole and the have measures.
Mixing that up will make your tune more interesting.
Another thing is try to have variety in the the note velocity which means creating dynamics. A human will never play each note exactly the same volume.
This is important for the piano notes.
You will add instant emotion when you play with the volume as well!

8/10 4/5

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[To Get Home]

I pretty much agree with

Jewelz...
You have a real good voice that reminds me of INXS>
Continue to get better.
Garage band is fine to start with but there are better programs.
The snare gets on the nerves.

Good job

8/10 4/5

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[CKC ft Shy2Authentik - Broken]

Just really good

Keep on going keep on flowing spit it you'll fit it!

10/10 5/5

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CKC2009 responds:

lol the lyrics were Shy2Authenik man.. thanks.

[Radosh - Sunrising (Full)]

Very nice!!!

Well balanced nice use of ambient synths.
I like the bell sound that sort of plays a minimalistic tune!
Very very very good!

Good bassline!!
10/10 5/5

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Radosh responds:

Thx.. Finally something I wanted to hear xD! yOP Ill check it!

[Any help? Soul GXIII]

I agree the song isn't that bad

when it comes to melody. But the drumms are all over the place.
What would help is stick with a four to the floor beat and have some variation just with the snare. Use some hihats to fill the drums to completion.
Compress the drumms. watch a manual on youtube on compression of drumms.

7/10 4/5 for effort

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[dirty_knobs_01]

It is not torture

It is well krafted ambient industrial music

In its genre it is pretty good.
i like it although i would play with the wolume level of some of the noise sounds you have there.. Put it in Industrial it fits better!

8/10 4/5

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[°°Densha Otoko°°]

Do not try to improve

unless you want to make into a song with vocals or something!
It is very usefull for a game.
I like this and could imagine this in a game!
9/10 5/5

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Whirlguy responds:

Ha, a song with vocals. I've actually been thinking of doing that. My microphone's real shitty though, and my room's accoustics suck. Besides, my own poetry sort of depresses me, so I don't think that's gonna happen.

A game? I never thought about it that way, maybe. I would need to loop it first :3

Thanks for reviewing. I've returned the favor (: