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[.:TD - DM5 - Move for Me (FLP)]

Good stuff

You never disappoint me Tom!

10/10 5/5

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[Battle of The Void (WIP)]

I agree with below

The bass was absolutly perfect.
Try to get a better melody out of your head :D
The bass is really really really good!! The beat is great.
Wait the melody at around 2:12 is very good indeed.
Try to get that sooner. Just my opinion...

10/10 5/5

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[Musical Feelings]

It is good but

The sound setting are to loud overall.
It distorts almost every sound because of that.
This happens mainly on the harder parts.
You have to remember one thing: Sound adds up in volume.
10 very silent notes added up make one hard note.

Work on the volume and balance and you'll be fine!

9/10 5/5

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[i'm waking up]

$20 mic????

You did a good job on it i must tell you!!
Good use of the reverb!!!
9/10 5/5

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[B4ZZL1N3]

Cool track

You may want to cut the side chaining back just a little.
The synth effect was a little loud at 1:36 tiny bit more subtle there.
The voice synth is the same for long you might want to add a variation.

cool song 9/10 5/5

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Maverlyn responds:

Thx! it's still a loooong way to go on this one. and this is only the first part of the intro :) all in all it's going to be atleast 7 hours long.

[Sami's Song]

Good job

Maybe add some higher synth sounds later on in the song and play a minimalistic melody.
Good stuff!

9/10 5/5

[Path of Oblivion]

Amazing atmosphere you got here

I would say just keep doing what you are doing :D
It is really good.
I would set the volume of the Basspad a but lower and when you add the high sparkly sounds turn that volume a bit up.
At 2:00 You introduce the bass synth but i think that you pull it out of the filter just a little to much. I hear its resonation and imo it doesnt really fit the rest of the music.
All in all 9/10 5/5

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ThePal responds:

Thanks for the review. :D
I see that the resonance on the bass synth gets a bit too high now. I'll get that down. Else i think that the basspad and the high sparkly sound fit quite good. I think that it could be set down abit, and it also could sound nice. I'll go trying it out.
By the way, checked out your song. Very nice. :D

- ThePal

[Presentation]

Good Effort

My advise is to always try to give your best when you decide to do things.
Don;t do it just for a higher grade :D
The song lets me hear that you have some talents!
And when i started making music i was worse than you :D
Don't let any bad comment put you down because there are many things that are pretty good here.
The Slayer guitar sucks but that is because its slayer :P
If you have played that with almost any other sound it would sound better.
The beat sound pretty good!

The piano part is good. Can be better but it is pretty decent!
Making music is a joy and a positive thing Kids like: jobskid do not really understand how important it is to stimulate creativity!
So This is what i say Keep at it! Always try to get the maximum out of what you are doing! Not just for the grades :P

8/10 For the piano part the beat and the strings! 4/5

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