Experimental
It is good but too ambient. it clutters what is in the song in terms of other instruments.
I would change the kicks and have them coming in where we expect them.
It is nice to experiment but it is very hard to go against the laws of a genre it seldom succeeds even with the real professionals....
I give it 8/10 and 4/4 because of the originality and the thinking outside of the box/
Please return the favor on my new song?
A man hides his tears